If this is an intro you plan to use for repeated things ('Lets play' tends to be Youtube
things that you air regularly, if I understand correctly) Then this needs to be WAY shorter, otherwise your fans will get bored before your movie starts.
Also, there is an accent on the 'e' in Pokémon. I know accents don't make sense to native English speakers(except in rare cases like Resumé), but it without it the word is spelled wrong.
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